10 credit card haikus, #3

front of the counter
slice of plastic being swiped -
a rite of passage



polona said...

windswept leaves
inserting a card
into an ATM

scatterhaiku said...

those same windswept leaves
making a call to the bank -
machine ate the card


Borut said...

Moment after moment, the rite of passage from boyhood to manhood!?:)

scatterhaiku said...

or from girlhood to womanhood? or from promising financial beginnings to something not quite so sunny?

thanks for the comment, borut. :)